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She wanders through this darkness
Trying to find something, anything
Trying to find where 
Her happiness lies

She pauses
Takes a breath
And begins to think
That finding happiness
Is completely hopeless

She takes one step
And then another
And then she discovers
A rose draped doorway
In the corner of her minds eye

What lies behind this door?
She asks 
Too nervous to enter
In case she finds nothing

Behind that door 
Contains everything she has never seen
And never felt

A beautiful passage
Leading to a place
Where happiness lives
Filled with Roses
Butterflies
Family
And everything that is so full of life
Everything she wants
Everything she craves
And once discovered 
she will never leave

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There she sits
Still as can be
Not seeing anyone around her
And not hearing anything they say

They say she should have been better now
But she has only gotten worse
She is stuck inside her mind
And she doesn't want to be freed
a poem for Round II of the writing tournament  :iconwriters--club: :)          Heart HeartWish me luckHeart Heart 
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religiouscornrose237 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student General Artist
Splendid work! This speaks to me on a personal level, and thusly I consider it a solid and meaningful piece of writing.
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BlackGoddess13 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
This is so perfect and so beautiful and haunting.

Can I reference this in a story I'm working on? I think it's perfect for it.
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Su1cidalDream Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :happybounce:  

Yeah you can reference it :) Hug 
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BlackGoddess13 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
Thank you!
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Su1cidalDream Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
youre very welcome :)
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hannahplatts Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
I love this :)
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Su1cidalDream Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:happybounce:  yay :)
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